This is a really exciting competition; the live lesson was really inspiring. Every single story written in class was original - which is lucky as originality is one of the judging criteria. Now all stories have been typed I'll begin the posting of stories. Some pupils may need a third edit so this process may take some time. Good luck to everyone entering the competition. A Dare to Scare “Okay this one’s for both of you, I dare you to go to the abandoned Mental Asylum down the road!” Zack yelled at both the girls “I am up for it!” I said trying to look as positive as I could. “I’m not sure.” Zoe squealed as quiet as a mouse. ”don’t worry Zack’s coming to aren’t you?” I said “of course I am I would never leave you two girls alone!” laughed Zack “fine!” trembled Zoe.
As soon as I got home I asked my mum if I could go for a sleepover “alright but take your phone with you, “she sighed “thanks mum!” I said excitedly. My friends and I arrived at the abandoned Mental Asylum. It was 5:30 and it was getting very dark. “Guys please can we go back.” Zoe whispered “NO!”I laughed “Don’t be such a Scaredy Cat!” Zoe started trembling so much she had Goosebumps. I carefully pushed the door while the others tip-toed in behind me. “What’s that?” asked Zoe “and what’s that?” “That is a cage door so the mental people couldn’t get out and that is a puddle of blood!” I teased. “No it’s not Sophia don’t worry Zoe we are both here.” Zack said kindly to sooth Zoe’s nerves “HELLOOOOOOO!” Zack yelled at the top his lungs. Which only made Zoe worse. Every so often we heard screams from different rooms. As we walked on it seemed to get louder and louder. All of a sudden we heard the biggest blood-curdling scream, which didn’t sound like all the others, it sounded like it was somebody who was still alive, today! It came again but this time Zoe screamed and fell to the floor. “Zack….” I whispered “she has fainted that’s all we need in situation like this.” Zack whispered back. We saw an old hospital bed and put Zoe carefully on it. As I pushed it along the wheels screeched, creaked and jolted. “Zack….” I said as we could both see a dark figure in the distance. “Just stay still.” He said reassuringly. The figure moved closer until Zoe opened her eyes and took a big breathe. “Guys what happened I feel really dizzy!” Zoe yelled “you will be okay.” I whispered as I shone my torch onto the dark figure in the distance. I could just make out a nurse but the nurse looked different, unusual. I realised what was different about her, it was that she had an apron with blood over it. “RUN!” I yelled as loud as I could. ”She has us cornered!” Zack said in such a rush. All of a sudden I saw an open window and I stood making my plan. ”JUMP…..OUT…OF…THE….WINDOW!” I mouthed to them. We jumped out the window and ran for our lives home. “Sophia….WAKE UP! “My mum yelled up the stairs. I realised it was a dream. I saw an apron with blood on….. I had never thought the same about mental asylum ever again……..
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On Monday morning we went to the Rec to do cross country! Old Buckingham primary school, kenning Hall and Banham came to the rec as well. When we were waiting for year 6 to be rounded to the starting line, we could hear cheering and excitement from the other schools as well as us. Finally year 6 went to the start line, the man told us to just keep going even if we had a stitch (we did 2 and ¾ around the pitch so we sometimes walked slowly until somebody told us to hurry up!)
We started running and I got a stitch straight away and when I got to my second lap I was already sweating from head to toe, and then worst of all throughout all of year 6’s races it rained. Everybody else thought it was funny because they had grey skies, but no rain so we got very cold and wet. When we got to the finish line I was panting, sweating and I think some crying was involved because I was so happy with where I came over all. I was celebrating with my best friend because she came first and I came 25th big distance but, I was happy anyway because I persevered just running was hard. When we were hearing the scores I got so excited when we said our school came 3rd overall so I shouted “VICTORY!” If there was another cross country, count me IN! By Sophia Never Seen Again from MrsWills on Vimeo. Jeff Studios from MrsWills on Vimeo. Hannah Hannah from MrsWills on Vimeo. Dabalicious from MrsWills on Vimeo. |
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